ah, happiness
Feb. 8th, 2009 07:45 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
aithneStorm helped me fix the broken story. He dug something out from the extremely distant past of this story, suggested a motivation I hadn't thought about...and boom, fixed story.Very fixed story. "Bloody hell, that is evil and brilliant" type fixed.
Alystin is no longer lying to me. She is telling me an exceeding uncomfortable story, this much is true, but she is telling me the truth.
Now I've gotten a start on that, the little red dog is telling me she is bored, so off to amuse her I go.
Alystin is no longer lying to me. She is telling me an exceeding uncomfortable story, this much is true, but she is telling me the truth.
Now I've gotten a start on that, the little red dog is telling me she is bored, so off to amuse her I go.
